Talk:The Beyoncé Experience Live/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 10:57, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

• In the info box why is the Beyoncé video chronology blue and the rest of it brown? - To showcase the difference; the info box for videos is blue and the one for live albums is brown.
• In the info box genres should be alhpabetical  Done
• The Beyoncé Experience Live is a live DVD by American R&B recording artist Beyoncé Knowles released by Columbia Records on November 20, 2007. → When I read this out loud it feels like I need to take a breath, maybe a comma should be used somewhere.  Done
• on November 19, 2007 the → Need a comma after 2007  Done
• In Background release, on September 2, 2007 during Knowles' → Also needs a comma after 2007. This needs to be applied to subsequent dates as I can see more without them.  Done
• A cut-down version of the Los Angeles show was also shown in the United Kingdom on Channel 4. → Source?  Done - Removed
• all-woman → I think all-female would sound better  Done
• The Peak positions charts don't have the shaded WP:ACCESS but the year end tables do, they should all have the shading.  Done
• Also, I'd separate the year end tables instead of having it all group together as one.  Done
• The country column of the release history should have the shading too.  Done
• iTunes and Apple aren't linked the first time in the references.  Done
• Loads of dead links which need to be removed and preferably replaced.

Status

On hold.  — AARON • ^TALK 22:07, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

I assume you're sorting the dead links as you didn't tick it?  — AARON • ^TALK 22:30, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

My computer doesn't show any dead links anymore. Can you please tell me if there are some left? My love is love (talk) 06:38, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

The Greek Top 20 DVD still shows as dead.  — AARON • ^TALK 10:20, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Removed. I couldn't find anything for that. My love is love (talk) 17:32, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Okay. Passing.  — AARON • ^TALK 18:38, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

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