Talk:The Beast (Neon Genesis Evangelion)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

I'll be making the review of this article.Tintor2 (talk) 18:12, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

No problems with the lead. However:

• Remember that in the body we are reintroducing the cast and terms so descriptions like Shinji's identity or Misato should be briefly explained.
• "Production began in September 1994, simultaneously with "Angel Attack", and ended in May 1995" needs to be more specific. "Production of the episode"?
• Movies should be given their year of release so "Sayonara Jupiter" could have it.
• Reception's mention of Anime News Network is elaborated in the next paragraph but no Newtype.

Anyway, good work with the article. @TeenAngels1234:.Tintor2 (talk) 19:48, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

@Tintor2:  Done Technically speaking, Oguro wrote that articles/reviews for Newtype mentioned in the first paragraph. He generically praised "The Beast" animation, and I wanted to avoid the old direct-quotation-mode for prose reasons.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 21:19, 30 January 2021 (UTC)