Talk:Terminal Aérea metro station/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Username6892 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Nomination failed (withdrawn)

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Reviewer: Username6892 (talk · contribs) 16:10, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I'm Username6892, and I will be reviewing this article. I may give some comments before completing the review. Username6892 16:10, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
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Location

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  • On their Policy Review of Mexico, OECD criticized the location for not being tourist-friendly.[6] On the page number given, the criticism is about the station design and lack of information rather than the location. (2c)
  • Reworded.
  • It also serves colonias Peñón de los Baños and Moctezuma 2ª sección Is there an English translation for this? (1a)
  • I can change colonia to neighborhood (with a link to colonia), but in the strict sense, I can't translate proper names. While "Moctezuma Second Section" might be understandable "Crag of the Bathrooms" is not. © Tbhotch (en-3). 18:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Station layout

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  • Not cited (2c)
  • Removed

History and construction

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Between Oceanía–Terminal Aérea stretch, the track goes from surface to underground,[10] ref 10 says that it's between Terminal Aerea and Hangares (2c), also, change it to "Between Oceanía (or Hangares because that's what the source says) and Terminal Aérea, the track runs from the surface to an underground tunnel" (1a)

  • Source 10 says: "En el tramo Oceanía-Puerto Aéreo se localiza la transición de vía superficial o en tajo a subterránea, y a ese nivel quedan las estaciones Terminal Aérea y Hangares, así como el tramo que las une, cuya estructura fue construida con el sistema de muros Milán." Transliterally it says "In the Oceanía-Puerto Aéreo--the avenue--stretch the ground-level to underground transition is located, and at that level--it refers to underground--Terminal Aérea and Hangares stations are located, like the stretch that connects them, whose structure of diaphragm wall was built by the Milan method".--I could add this last part I forgot. © Tbhotch (en-3). 18:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Landmarks

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  • Four murals, titled Paisajes cálidos y fríos,[20] are located at the end of each platform (Cálidos in the northern walls and Fríos in the southern walls);[10] ref 10 doesn't support the content (although the attached pdf might) (2c)
    "and murales en los vestíbulos y las cabeceras de los andenes ... el de la cabecera sur, “Paisajes Cálidos”, y el de la cabecera norte, ”Paisajes Fríos”." -> "and murals in the lobbies and platform headers(?) ... southbound, Warm landscapes, and northbound Cold landscapes--which I wrote backward and now make more geographic sense". I don't know if there's an English word for these walls which are called "cabeceras". © Tbhotch (en-3). 18:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • The other two murals, named Tlaltilco (east corridor) and Cuitzeo (west corridor),[10][20] are located in the station corridors.[10] refs don't seem to support that they're locatied within the station corridors (2c)
    Changed to lobby, because it says vestíbulo.
  • Terminal Aérea is briefly mentioned in the Aníbal Ricci book Fear (2007) when the protagonist arrives at the Airport and asks for directions to the city center.[24] Seems trivial (3b)
  • Removed.

Images

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I don't think the gallery is needed.

  • Removed.

Overall

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Before I place this on hold, I will request a 2nd opinion for the exit list as well as if this is a reliable source.

Second opinion from Vami IV
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