Talk:Teardrops on My Guitar/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Candyo32 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Candyo32 14:58, 22 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Heyyyooo Ipod!! Another T-Swizzle article? Fabooo. I'll be reviewing it for you.

Lead

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Perhaps rename Background and inspiration.
Most Taylor Swift song articles like Tim McGraw (song), Our Song (song), White Horse (song) and so on just have it as "Background". I think it'd be best to keep them cohesive. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:06, 22 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Comma after Fearless (2008)
Done.
gentle ----> a gentle
Done.
"Teardrops on My Guitar" was commercially successful. It at number thirteen on the Billboard Hot 100, becoming the best-charting single from Taylor Swift on the chart." --> combine these sentences
Done.
endeared by: ----> endeared by, commenting:
Done.
You should but that big quote by her in the second paragraph in a box or a blockquote.
I didn't like the way it separated the paragraph, so I paraphrase it. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:06, 22 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Critical reception

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Paraphrase the first PopMatters quote a bit
Done.
"Chuck Taylor, also of Billboard, reviewed the pop version release of "Teardrops on My Guitar". He said, "A beautiful mainstream intro to an artist whose rise is ably exemplified by her last name." --> ...."Teardrops on My Guitar", and said that it was "A...."
Done.

Music video

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have set --> have been set
Done.
American singer and actor Tyler Hilton
Done.

References

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Ref 1 - Link Big Machine Records, this is the first mentioning.
Done.
Ref 11 needs an accessdate
It does have an accessdate, but it doesn't appear because there is no url. I have been told to remove the music notes URL numerous times, so... -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:31, 22 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Ref 15 for New York use the location= paramater, and Billboard now published by Prometheus Global Media
The location parameter is already being used and the magazine at the time was published by Nielsen Business Media, Inc. So it should stay for that. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:31, 22 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Ref 21, 22, 23, 24, 57, 58 Billbord now published by Prometheus Global Media
Done.
Ref 32 Work is CMT.com, publisher MTV Networks (Viacom).
Changed to CMT. Isn't Viacom, the ultimate owner, enough? -- ipodnano05 * leave@message
Ref 34, 36, 37, 38, 39, 43 publisher MTV Networks (Viacom).
Isn't Viacom, the ultimate owner, enough? -- ipodnano05 * leave@message
Ref 43 unitalicize CMT.
Done.
Ref 44 unitalicize iTunes Store
Done.
Ref 33 - Work is MTV.com, publisher is MTV Networks (Viacom).
Changed to MTV. And again, shouldn't Viacom suffice? -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:31, 22 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Ref 41 - Unitalicize MTV, publisher is MTV Networks (Viacom).
Done.


I think that's about it! Good work! Candyo32 14:58, 22 April 2011 (UTC)Reply


I'm fine with the changes made. I'll pass. Candyo32 15:51, 24 April 2011 (UTC)Reply