Talk:Taylor–Burton Diamond/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Gareth E Kegg in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:49, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:49, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
- No DABs
- External links good.
- Can we get a picture of the diamond or of Taylor wearing it, or both?
- 68 carat Hyphenate this as they form a compound adjective. And the same for Taylor Burton. And here: 33.19 carat
- Link on first use: Cartier
- Move the metric conversion for 68 carats to its first use in the lede.
- Sultan of Brunei Hassanal Bolkiah put a comma after Brunei.
- diamond with the 33.19 carat Krupp Diamond You already told the reader the size.
- figure believed to be almost $5,000,000[18] or $3,000,000 Awkward, rephrase.
- Don't use the semicolon for your headers in last section as screen readers choke on them. Use the ordinary equals sign heading code.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:02, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
- Failed for lack of response.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:46, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
- My apologies, I was not aware that you had conducted this review. Thank you so much for such a through response, I've made all the changes you suggested, with the exception of the comma after Brunei as I feel it might suggest that they are two different people. Thank you once again. Gareth E Kegg (talk) 11:16, 12 November 2015 (UTC)