Talk:Talon (roller coaster)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 16:55, 12 April 2013 (UTC) I will be reviewing this article along with Hydra the Revenge. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 16:55, 12 April 2013 (UTC)

Lead

As I do not see a reference elsewhere, I will require a citation be given for the following posit: "Talon was known to be one of the longest inverted roller coaster in the Northeast when it opened in 2001."
All else is good within the lead!

Dom added a couple of sources to the lead. I also added a line in the history section with a different source. Themeparkgc  Talk  00:36, 13 April 2013 (UTC)

Infobox

All is fine here.

History

Excellent adducing! However, if possible, I would like to see a mention of the design process of Bollinger and Mabillard within the History section.

Though that would be excellent, B&M's design/manufacturing process is top secret (for competition reasons).--Dom497 (talk) 20:09, 12 April 2013 (UTC)

Ride experience

This section is fine.

Trains

The one reference given is applicable to the entire section.

Track

Excellent!

Awards

Fine here.

Conclusion

All sections pass, aside from the lead, which needs just one small addition. The pictures are also suitable for utilization. Therefore, I will pass this article as soon as all proposed changes are made. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 17:18, 12 April 2013 (UTC)