Talk:Success Bank

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Mitch Ames in topic Parmelia Bank

Parmelia Bank edit

Is Parmelia Bank part of Success Bank, or is it a separate sandbank?

The article needs some copy-editing, but it's difficult given the current anomalies in the text:

The sandbank [Success Bank] extends about 8 kilometres ... covers an area of 1,205 hectares (2,980 acres). Two approximately 15-metre-deep (49 ft) man-made shipping channels, ... dissect the sandbar. The [single] name being Success Channel

Are there two channels in Success Bank or one? If two, what is the name of the second one? I suspect that the second one might be Parmelia Channel, but Parmelia Channel apparently runs through Parmelia Bank:

Parmelia Bank ... The channel through this bank is likewise named after the bank - Parmelia Channel ....

If Parmelia Bank is part of Success Bank, the article should say so explicitly. If not, Parmelia Bank should be moved to a separate article, or the Success Bank article should explicitly say it is separate - in which case there is probably on one channel through Success Bank (ie Success Channel). Mitch Ames (talk) 05:56, 15 January 2017 (UTC)Reply