Talk:Star Trek: Enterprise season 4/GA1

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 18:09, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Hello!

Episode arcs

• The list article that Suliban points to doesn't include any reference to the race. I'm wondering whether it's worth restoring the Suliban article, a redirect since 2011, as they were such a significant part of the series?

• Most of the Star Trek alien races were merged into the lists - and not particularly well either. It's something that can certainly be expanded on, as it's just been raised at the project as someone else pointed out that it also applied to Hirogen. Miyagawa (talk) 18:37, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

• Seeing that Orion slave girl also leads nowhere. -- Zanimum (talk) 20:00, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

• Yeah, looks like I might have some work on my hands there! Time to give some of those a bit of an overhaul (or at least install some heavily cited start type articles). Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

More comments later. -- Zanimum (talk) 18:09, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Passing "Cancellation", I forgot about the proto-Kickstarter campaign. Passing "Production", "Ratings", "Accolades", "See also", "Notes". -- Zanimum (talk) 20:02, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Passing infobox, Images, lead, production (I've never heard of Shatnerverse. Interesting.), and reviews.

These Are The Voyages...

The pictures look like TNG karaoke! Nothing against these images, but we to start getting Wikimedia partnerships with conventions, to get new images. Also, I love the sprinter/bus quote.

• inconsistent capitalization of Holodeck/holodeck

  Fixed to the lowercase holodeck. Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Passing "Cast".

Episodes

• Why is Surak Fed in superscript? They appear to point to non-existent footnotes.

• That's from the main episode list to denote episode arcs. I don't think they're necessary and have removed them. I'm aiming to get the main episode list up to FL quality - but I just need to work through it to get the tables to the same state that season four is in. Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

• I'm not sure you need to overlink Archer in the episode list.

• I've trimmed the linking down in the episode list quite a fair bit. Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Home media release

• What's the order of languages? Is that how they are on the DVD packaging? There's not alphabetical, nor are they English first.

• I fixed the order. Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

References

When I save the page, it reveals "Hidden categories". One of them is for the subscription content, but the other is "Pages using citations with accessdate and no URL". I honestly don't know which reference it's talking about.

• I've gone through them all and can't find a cite without a URL (apart from the one without an accessdate either as it was a newspaper report from 1969). Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

• 15/16: Twitter, from what I've been told in my own GANs, isn't acceptable by itself. When Braga tweeted clarification about Future Guy, did any website report on it? Keep the actual tweets, but also cite the coverage of the identification.

• I've added an extra cite to show independent coverage of the tweets. Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

• 70/71: Amazon is italicized once, not italicized the other time.

• Fixed - it was listed as "work" in one cite and "publisher" in another. Miyagawa (talk) 10:40, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Passing "External links". -- Zanimum (talk) 21:40, 3 May 2014 (UTC)

Seems to be everything. Pass! -- Zanimum (talk) 19:45, 5 May 2014 (UTC)