Talk:Spotlight (song)/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Tbhotch in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TbhotchTalk C. 05:30, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

I've reviewd the article, in general all is fine except something:

Lead

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  • The song was used in a Mitsubishi VCR commercial, featuring Madonna. -> maybe where she appeared?
    • Done.

Critical Review

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  • Chicago Tribune -> Wikilink
    • It has been wikilinked in the line before. Again linking it will cause WP:OVERLINK.

Chart performance

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  • "...stations started to play the song unofficially and it managed to garner enough airplay to appear..." -> source?
    • Added from Feldman.

Media appearance

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  • "The commercial featured..." -> In the commercial featured...
    • Rephrased.

Credits and personnel

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  • Source?
    • Added.

Notes

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ISBN 0743228804, from reference 1 is failing.

Failing? How? The same isbn is given at Google also. --Legolas (talk2me) 06:00, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
Well, I used WorldCat, IBDB and IBList and all failed, but don't worry I found the correct ISBN (0743227093). TbhotchTalk C. 06:12, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Final comments

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Some comments, not much work to do, so the article is in hold on for a week. TbhotchTalk C. 05:30, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

OK. So anything else? --Legolas (talk2me) 06:27, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
The ISBN (above). TbhotchTalk C. 06:29, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
All done. --Legolas (talk2me) 06:33, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
So, congratulation the article pass its nomination. TbhotchTalk C. 06:37, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply