Talk:Soviet submarine S-99/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 03:01, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Initial review

I plan to review this article for GA class. Overall, it looks good. Djmaschek (talk) 03:01, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

B class review

This article meets all the criteria for B class. Djmaschek (talk) 21:15, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Review 1

@Sturmvogel 66: Referring to the following issues, please fix or argue your case for not fixing. Djmaschek (talk) 22:05, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

• Well-written, verifiable, broad coverage, neutral, stable, illustrated.  Done
• Introduction: "Soviet Union" and "submarine" are each linked twice within the introduction paragraph.
• Narrative-infobox contradiction: Submerged displacement is different (1,500 t vs. 1,215 t).
• Description, paragraph 1: "Draft (ship)" is in the narrative. Omit the "(ship)" part.
• Infobox, Complement & Surface speed: I cannot find the crew size (51) or surface speed (11 knots) in the narrative.
• Construction and career, sentence 2: "Platonov says" (Source is Pavlov, not Platonov.)
  • Too many Soviet destroyer articles for which Platonov is a key reference!
    • All done, see if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:51, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
      • @Sturmvogel 66: GA class. Please have a look at 1500 tonnes = 1500 long tons submerged displacement in infobox and narrative. Surface displacement (950 t = 930 LT) shows the units are different, so readers may be confused. I recommend adding round=5 parameter to convert function to make it 1500 t = 1475 LT, but you may wish to use a different rounding value. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 03:18, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
        • Good catch, done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:33, 11 January 2023 (UTC)