Talk:Soviet destroyer Moskva/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 11:57, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

I'll take this one. Parsecboy (talk) 11:57, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

• The lead seems a bit short, though I don't know what you might include, given the short career of the ship. It seems like the date in the lead should be the date of the raid, not Barbarossa, since the former is more relevant to the ship.

• Done. Kges1901 (talk) 13:48, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

• Link propeller, submarine, keel laying, squadron (naval), and perhaps pipe "People's Commissar for the Navy" to Minister of Defence (Soviet Union).

• Done.

• Image licensing checks out.

Not much from me on this, nice work. Parsecboy (talk) 13:35, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

Looks good, happy to promote now. Parsecboy (talk) 20:26, 23 October 2018 (UTC)