Talk:Sophie Bissonnette/Archive 1

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Some revisions necessary.

• You have found a lot of good information about this important filmmaker.
• Revise the opening paragraph so that it describes Bissonnatte’s career and importance in broad terms. Move the detailed information to later sections.
• Add references throughout the text to show where each piece of information comes from.

Chronophoto (talk) 01:08, 20 February 2018 (UTC) (course instructor)

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Great article, I really enjoyed reading it! I think you could strengthen the article by linking certain references or terms to other institutions, festivals and awards. It would make the overall article much more relevant in connection to other articles on Wikipedia.

This following sentence is a little confusing to me: "With a bachelor degree in arts from and studying cinema and film, she began pursuing her passion towards cinema in Montreal." I wonder if you could clarify this sentence and link to the University or institution that the filmmaker studied at, and find a way to explore this subject a little more it would be interesting to read!

Vera otter (talk) 04:14, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

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Hi WikiMaster008, and thanks for creating the article (ping Chronophoto). A few stylistic notes:

• Please don't use Embedded links in the body of the article.
  • For the films, if they are sufficiently notable that they warrant a separate article, then just wikilink them as redlinks. Otherwise leave them without a link; or have a section or subsection within this article for each major film, create redirects to section for each of the films, and then wikilink.
  • For the film organisations, suggest editing Cinema of Quebec and possibly Culture of Quebec to cover them if necessary, create redirects to the appropriate section, and then wikilinking those.
• Reference names are clearer as names, particularly with expansion and reorganisation where ":3" might not be the fourth reference in the reflist.
• I've sectioned off sources, but these can probably be deleted or merged into the citations.

^~Hydronium^~Hydroxide^~(Talk)~ 08:36, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

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