- These tasks can be addressed in any order:
Prose
- Focus article on the character Sonic, and his creation and evolution. Reduce discussion about the games in general
- Edit sections from an out-of-universe perspective where possible.
- Copyedit sentences with redundant words. (See: How to satisfy Criterion 1a)
- Replace references to concept-mobius and ghz with suitable (quoted) references using {{cite video game}} where possible.
- Remove fancrufty comments about speculation and fan tastes. (e.g. is Shadow or Metal Sonic more popular, etc.)
- Remove original research. (Metal Sonic's current location, reasons behind talking, etc.)
- Reformat external links in the text as footnote references.
- Clean up the article to use the same person, in particular, do not intermix you/we.
- Use the dash guidlines consistently.
- Use consistent punctuation.
- Add Ryan Drummond to the "Voice portrayal" section. He was the official voice of Sonic for six years and yet he's mysteriously absent in this section.
- Remove pointless lists.
- All plot should be written in present tense.
- Add overall article template for all Sonic character articles for uniformity
- Remove the fact that he is uninterested in martial proposals from Amy Rose. You never know...
Images
- NB: Try to make sure that downsized transparent PNGs do not have a black background in IE.