Talk:Songs of Experience (David Axelrod album)/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:20, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Comments

• "album Song of Innocence, he composed" -> "album Song of Innocence, Axelrod composed" (because you've mentioned other people between here and the last mention of Axelrod).
• Looks like Blake's work was "Songs of Innocence and of Experience" (i.e. note the second "of").
• "Like on his 1968" would prefer "As he had on his 1968..."
• "gatefold LP" just links to gatefold so no need to include LP in the link. Particularly as you later link LP individually.
• Was it Axelrod who "dubbed the album..."? If so, attribute that quote accordingly.

No author of liner notes indicated; changed to "liner notes stated". Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

• "of majesty and "pastoral sadness", respectively" why only half of this in quotes?

Only "pastoral sadness" is taken verbatim from the source cited. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

• Allmusic -> AllMusic.
• Any information on sales statistics from the original or the reissue?

Unfortunately no, either because it's not a notable enough release or the sales were non-existent. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

• Could split refs into two columns.
• Allmusic, gatefold comments above apply in refs too.
• Spaced hyphens in ref titles should be replaced with spaced en-dashes ({{endash}}) per WP:DASH.

This was the only one I could find the ref titles. Let me know if there are any others. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

A few comments, so I'll put the article on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:03, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Addressed most points in this edit. Let me know if I overlooked something. Dan56 (talk) 22:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)