Talk:Somebody to Love (Justin Bieber song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Novice7 | Talk 17:22, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Very good. Here are some errors I saw

Lead

• Just a doubt, is Heather Bright connected with 'The Stereotypes'?

They are linked together because most of her written songs are produced by them and she does not have a page of her own.

• rhythmic radio → radios

"Radio" as in airplay and the stations as a whole not sent out to every individual radio lol.

• The song has received positive reviews, "with critics" commenting.

Done.

• According to critics, makes.. → something is missing in between the comma and makes.

Done. Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:16, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Background

• Lol, is [laughs] required?

Done. Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:16, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

• Perez Hilton was the one who recommended the song for Bieber, (and that after that the ...) → that seems like it's repeating.

Done

• A variation of the track with slightly different production by, featuring Usher → Is something missing or an error?

Done. Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:16, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Composition and critical reception

• Nothing. Very good.

Chart performance

• After weeks of steadily ascending the charts due to airplay, after the remix featuring Usher was released.. → after repeats.

Done. Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:16, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Music video

• Good!

Live performances

• "Bieber performed 'Somebody to Love' on multiple occasions, including as a part of his set list on the My World Tour." → remove "as a part of his set list on". Also, shouldn't it be Bieber "has" performed?

"part of his set list" is relevant because otherwise it may be thought that he performed it on the tour on one or however number of occasions, but this denotes that it was a set part of the tour on each date.

• alongside "Baby" and other of his previous songs. → Hmmm... maybe rewording?

Done

• Along with "Baby" is repetitive.

I can't find "along with Baby" used in the article. Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:16, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Other sections are great as always :) Novice7 | Talk 17:22, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Okay, pass. Novice7 | Talk 04:26, 28 December 2010 (UTC)