Talk:Skinner's Sense of Snow/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by WHPratt in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 20:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Comments

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  • "Only some students, including Bart and Lisa's classes show up while Skinner and Willie are the only faculty members to show up." Change it up a little
You might use Skinner's phrase for the no-shows: "Those Johnny-come-not-lies". WHPratt (talk) 15:49, 4 November 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • How does Skinner's movie get "wrecked"?
  • "...threatening to put them on pegs if they rebel" What do you mean by pegs? Sounds amusing, whatever it is
  • Are Homer and Flanders trying to rescue just Bart and Lisa, or the other children as well? I know that Flanders has a couple kids. Maybe change Bart and Lisa to "Meanwhile, Homer, with the help of Ned Flanders, sets out to rescue the children"
  • Sentences with quotes need citations
  • "The staff of The Journal, while reviewing The Simpsons - Christmas 2 DVD set, described the episode as "memorable",[10] and John McMurtrie of the San Francisco Chronicle described it as "great".[11] " Change it up
  • Ref 7: page number?

On hold for seven days while above comments get addressed. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 20:51, 13 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

All done! User:Queenieacoustic hasn't made any edits since August 4 (I hope he hasn't retired...), so I took care of it. Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 21:18, 13 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
Looks good. Happy to pass this one for GA. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 01:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)Reply