Talk:Sine from Above/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GagaNutella (talk · contribs) 04:02, 5 February 2023 (UTC)

Lead/Top

• Just need to add the location of Henson Recording Studios. The rest is perfect.

Background and recording

• Wikilink Gaga and John in the image's caption;
• Add the Chromatica's release year in brackets;
• Replace Elton for John in the last paragraph.

"Chromatica III"

• Add the Down of Chromatica's release year in brackets.
• What do you think about both infoboxes? The first one is written Stefani Germanotta and the other Lady Gaga. Maybe it should be better to keep a standard.

Critical reception

• strongest songs on the Chromatica album → strongest songs on the album;
• Jem Aswad Variety thought that Elton → Variety's Jem Aswad thought that John;
• Add a comma after New York Magazine;
• and said that → stating that;
• found the song an → found it an;
• On the UK Singles Downloads Chart compiled by the Official Charts Company (OCC) the song → On the UK Singles Downloads Chart, compiled by the Official Charts Company (OCC), the song;
• months later in October it → months later, in October, it.

Remix

• Remove the release year in brackets;
• Mood Killer doing Elton John's part → Mood Killer doing John's part;
• Wikilink hardcore.

References

• Is EDM.com reliable (ref 47)?
• Ref 57: wikilink Billboard.

This article is almost perfect. 1% is really good for copy violation. On hold for 7 days. GagaNutella^talk 04:02, 5 February 2023 (UTC)

@GagaNutella: Thank you for the help. I addressed all your notes, except for these two:

• Lead/Top, "Just need to add the location of Henson Recording Studios. The rest is perfect."

Where would you like me to add it? Like this?

It was produced by BloodPop, Burns, Axwell, Liohn and Johannes Klahr,... → It was produced by BloodPop, Burns, Axwell, Liohn and Johannes Klahr in Henson Recording Studios (Los Angeles),...

• References, "Is EDM.com reliable (ref 47)?"

EDM.com is a fairly respectable site when it comes to electronic dance music, it's been used in articles such as Avicii, Steve Aoki, Martin Garrix, Deadmau5, etc. They frequently publish their own interviews with musicians, as well, therefore they sometimes have information that no other site does. --Sricsi (talk) 09:40, 5 February 2023 (UTC)

Passing. I have added the location in the infobox. Amazing article!

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