Talk:Siege of Port Royal (1707)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Magicpiano in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:28, 14 January 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteriaReply

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    This is rather awkward: capturing the capital Port Royal during Queen Anne's War. I'd suggest, "capturing its capital of Port Royal"
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    The only real issue was that I wasn't real sure where, or which Port Royal this article was referring to in the lede. I'd suggest adding present-day Nova Scotia after Acadia in the first sentence of the lede and swapping the two maps to put the general one up top.
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
Thanks for taking the time to review; I believe I've addressed your issues. Magic♪piano 15:46, 14 January 2011 (UTC)Reply