Talk:Si Prat/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Argento Surfer in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Argento Surfer (talk · contribs) 19:02, 10 July 2018 (UTC)Reply


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


All of my comments are open to discussion. Once complete, I will claim this review for points in the 2018 WikiCup. Argento Surfer (talk) 19:02, 10 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. Since it seems Kingoflettuce is busy at the moment, I'll try and see if I can address the issues (responses below). --Paul_012 (talk) 05:30, 15 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:  
    These are my copy edits. Please review for accuracy and revert/revise if needed.
    I've modified the edit in the death section, since the poem doesn't explicitly mention beheading. --Paul_012 (talk) 05:30, 15 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
    "masterpiece of punning and word play". - This quote should be attributed inline.
    I've provided attribution to Thomas J. Hudak, who presumably wrote the preface to his translated volume, where the quote is sourced from. I don't have full access to the book, however, so cannot be 100% sure. --Paul_012 (talk) 05:30, 15 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
    "it has also been argued" - who is arguing? Is one position more widely accepted than another?
    Added attribution. --Paul_012 (talk) 05:30, 15 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
    "Some scholars have suggested" I suggest adding "such as [specific scholar]" to avoid sounding weaselly. Same for the other scholars mentioned later in this sentence.
    Done. --Paul_012 (talk) 05:30, 15 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:  
    no concern
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:  
    no concern
    B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:  
    No concern
    C. It contains no original research:  
    The first sentence of the last paragraph under Historicity makes a strong claim for consensus doesn't have a citation. I assume it came from the same source as the following sentence?
    Yes. I've added an additional end-of-sentence citation. --Paul_012 (talk) 05:30, 15 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:  
    AGF for non-web / non-English sources. No concern
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:  
    no concern
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):  
    no concern
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:  
    no concern
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:  
    no concern
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    no concern
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
    no concern
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    A few concerns need to be addressed before I can pass this. Argento Surfer (talk) 14:23, 11 July 2018 (UTC)Reply