Talk:Shivalaya, Parbat

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Thnidu in topic badly garbled

badly garbled

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The text of this page is very ungrammatical and in many places hard to understand. It badly needs editing by someone who is competent in English as spoken in English-speaking countries and who also understands the form of Indian English used here. --Thnidu (talk) 02:11, 28 April 2015 (UTC)Reply