Talk:She Ain't You/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jivesh boodhun (talk · contribs) 12:17, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Hi. I will review this article. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:17, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Question

• Has the article ever been copy-edited? ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:24, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
  • No, is that going to be a problem? Oz ^talk 12:33, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Nooooo. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:41, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Media Review

• The sample should be 25 seconds long per WP:Music samples.  Done
• The sample can remain only if you improve the rationale. If you need help, tell me. Do not hesitate.
• The image is the music video section looks fine to me.

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:22, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Infobox

• |border = yes >>> should be added  Done
• Remove (radio) It is used only when a song is serviced to radio exclusively. For example, "Put It in a Love Song".  Done
• Add the year of recording
  • Not sure what year it was recorded. Album notes don't mention it. Oz ^talk 12:33, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Let it be. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:42, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Lead

• as the fourth US single from Brown's fourth >>> serving as the fourth US single.......... Done
• The song received a mixed response from critics. >>> The song received mixed to positive reviews form music critics.  Done

Note:You should know how to differentiate between mixed and mixed to positive.

• In the United States, "She Ain't You" reached number five on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, number seventeen on the Pop Songs chart, and number twenty-seven on the Billboard Hot 100.  Done

>>> "She Ain't You" reached number five on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, number 17 on the Pop Songs chart, and number 27 on the US Billboard Hot 100 chart.  Done

Not done. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:29, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Note: I suggest you read WP:NUMBERS.

 Done Oz ^talk 12:47, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

• The song also charted in the top-thirty in Australia and New Zealand. >>> The song also charted within the top-thirty on charts in Australia and New Zealand.  Done

Question: Was it released in these territories. Or is this a case similar to Na, na, na, diva is a female version of a hustla / Of a hustla, of a, of a hustla / Na, na, na, diva is a female version of a hustla / Of a hustla, of a, of a hustla

No, it was exactly like "Diva". Oz ^talk 12:55, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

So you have to make a little story. Lol.... Even though the song was not released outside the US.... blablabla  Done

Not done. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:30, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Check 'Chart performance' section. Oz ^talk 07:44, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

The lead too should have that. And these is one more comment above. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:53, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

 Done Oz ^talk 12:47, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

• An accompanying music video >>> The accompanying music video for the single  Done
• and sees Brown >>> and features Brown  Done
• The song has been performed >>> Brown performed "She Ain't You" live  Done

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:40, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Background and composition

I will continue at night. For now, i have to go and listen to some of this girl's music. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:49, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I will complete this on Thursday. Right now, i have exams. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:31, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

That's fine by me. Good luck with your exams! Oz ^talk 07:44, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Awwwwww thanks. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:56, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

When Will I Continue >>> After November 16, 2011

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 10:59, 1 November 2011 (UTC)

Ok then. Oz ^talk 11:11, 1 November 2011 (UTC)

Critical reception

• from or of?
• the sample gave >>> It still gives, right?
• added that its "definitely a song for the ladies ... maybe even for pop star Rihanna." >>> its?
  •  Done Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Chart performance

• On the issue dated April 2, 2011

Expalnation: We say; For the chart issue dated April 2, 2011, otherwise use For the week ending April 2, 2011.

• Make the necessary corrections elsewhere ^^^
• on the Billboard Hot 100 >>> on the US Billboard Hot 100
• for selling 35,000 digital copies >>> for selling more than 35,000 digital copies
• On the New Zealand Singles Chart, "She Ain't You" debuted at number 37, and later peaked at number 27,[23] and spent a total of seven weeks on the chart >>> On the New Zealand Singles Chart, "She Ain't You" debuted at number 37, peaked at number 27, and spent a total of seven weeks on the chart.
  •  Done Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Music video

• performs his iconic dance moves >>> is that a quote? Iconic? <<< Are you sure about the word iconic? If no, please put in between quotes and the as stated by bla bla bla thing.
• The video opens with a dedication, saying, >>> The video opens with the following dedication,
• in a '80s >>> in a 1980s
• Link fedora
• In between this scene >>> Does not sound goo. Rephrase or tell me, is it scenes that you wanted to write?

• Again, from or of?
• the same magic >>> A quote?

• •  Done Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Live performances

• 18,000 fans >>> All of them were fans? Lol.
  • I changed it to an audience of 18,000 people. Does that make sense? Lol. Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• No issues

Charts and certifications

• No issues

Release dates

• • No issues

References

• Ref 26, Digital Spy should not be italicized.
• Ref 27 publisher is Complex Media Network
• Ref 35 Remove UK R&B Chart.
• Ref 36 Remove UK Singles Chart.
  •  Done Oz ^talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Jivesh's feelings

Very nice work. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 10:31, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Congratulations. This article has passes. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 04:09, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! :D Oz ^talk 05:10, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

You are welcome. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 05:11, 21 November 2011 (UTC)