Talk:Secret Dreams and Forbidden Fire/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:47, 9 June 2015 (UTC)

Hi Bonnietylersave please start by correcting the external links in the checklinks tool on the right and the disambiguation links.

• It was released on 3 May 1986, by Columbia Records, as the follow-up to her fifth studio album, Faster Than the Speed of Night (1983). --> What do you mean by a followup?
• The album was a commercial success, reaching number one on the Norwegian Album Charts. --> Subjective, how can a #1 on a pretty minor chart be commercial success?
• The first para for the Background section needs many more inline citations. All I can see is an iTunes link.
• I'm also not believing these liner notes as just sources.
• Also, there's hardly any composition related details in the article. This is really incomplete.
• Steven Wine criticized the length of the tracks --> From which publication?
• In 1985, Tyler was recruited by Giorgio Moroder to record "Here She Comes" for the 1984 restoration version of the 1927 German film Metropolis --> This is just sourced to an iTunes link. Fails WP:V
• The next line is totally unsourced
• Again there is no commercial aspects of the album being discussed here at all.

Final comments

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Failing this, a lot of more work is required to promote this as GA —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 11:30, 26 June 2015 (UTC)