Talk:Scary Godmother: Halloween Spooktakular/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by HumanxAnthro in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks! HumanxAnthro (talk) 01:49, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead edit
- Using Amazon as a reference doesn't seem like a good choice per WP:AMAZON. I suggest replacing it with this.
- Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:19, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
- As the two references after "first book" are already in #Background_and_development, they're not necessary for the lead.
- Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 22:56, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
- Everything else looks good.
Plot edit
- "Katie, Bert and Daryl" → "Katie, Bert, and Daryl"
- "Bert, Daryl and Katie" → "Bert, Daryl, and Katie"
- "He declares himself the "leader" out of nowhere by winning a rock, paper, scissors game." → "He declares himself the "leader" after winning a rock, paper, scissors game."
- All of the following above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 22:58, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
Background and development edit
- "US$350,000" → "$350,000"
- "vice president Kim Dent Wilder" → "Mainframe vice president Kim Dent Wilder"
- "a TV series" → "a television series"
- All above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:07, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Production edit
Workflow edit
- In the last paragraph of this section, remove the last part of the quote "and generally bugged everyone several times a week with my yammering phone calls" as it seems unnecessary, and add an [and] in-between "designed sets, painted backgrounds".
- Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:08, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Casting edit
- This section looks good.
Animation edit
- ""blend"ing" → "blending"
- Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:08, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Visual style edit
- This section also looks good.
Release edit
- This reference in the article says the film went to Region 1 DVD on September 3, not September 8. Also, change this in the lead.
- "Germany and Italy" → "Germany, and Italy"
- All above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:10, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Reception edit
- "The Chicago Tribune" → "The Chicago Tribune"
- Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:09, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Overview edit
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- @HumanxAnthro: I just finished adding most, if not all of the rest of my notes. The article is well-written but has a few issues to address. Leave comments and ping me back, and I hope I can promote this article to GA-status soon. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 01:06, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: All completed HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:12, 29 January 2021 (UTC)