Talk:Satan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 18:36, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:36, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (37.5%, but due to paragraph quote, which is properly cited and done.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y [churchofsatan.com], "American Heritage Dictionary: Devil". both dead.

@Iazyges: I cannot find the links. Could you please state where they are located in the article? --Katolophyromai (talk) 21:42, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

@Katolophyromai: Ref #58, #204. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:36, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

@Iazyges: I have replaced the URL in reference #58 with a working URL. The URL in reference #204 actually seemed to work perfectly fine on my computer, so I am not sure why it would be labelled as "dead." In any case, that citation was only one of six citations all supporting the same statement, so I went ahead and just removed it. It could perhaps have qualified as WP:OVERCITE anyway. You may continue with the review. --Katolophyromai (talk) 02:04, 31 January 2018 (UTC)

• Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

• is a malevolent figure in the Abrahamic religions who add a comma between religions and who.
• When it is used without the definitive article (simply satan), the word can refer to any accuser suggest link to Article (grammar)#Definite article.
• only a talking serpent suggest only the talking serpent, as I don't recall any other talking serpents in the Bible/Qur'an post-garden, and I don't believe any others are mentioned in Judeo-Christo-Islamic theology.
• Thats all my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:55, 6 February 2018 (UTC)