Talk:Saskatchewan Highway 5/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by SriMesh in topic GA Review

GA Review

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  1.   Done What is the purpose of two maps in the infobox?
  2. Are there shields for the roads Highway 5 intersects? will try to modify template at User:Pomte/Template:SK road shield for this...
  3.   Done In first paragraph of lead, add comma after "Yellowhead"
  4.   Done Make the third parapgraph of the lead an italicized note at the top of the page
  5.   Done In first sentence of history, capitalize "river"
  6.   Done In first sentence in second paragraph of history, add comma after "Route"
  7.   Done In next sentence, change "an" to "a"
  8. "a dirt to gravel to all weather road" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
  9.   Done The sentence "In 1925, access from Saskatoon to Provincial Highway 5 was via Provincial Highway 12 due north of Saskatoon connecting with Highway 5 west of Warman or via Provincial Highway 27 which traveled east and north from Saskatoon connecting at Aberdeen" sounds unclear.
  10.   Done "north south" should be hyphenated
  11. "became retitled? sounds awkward
  12.   Done Try to combine some of the short sentences in the Communities section
  13.   Done "down town" should be one word
  14.   Done "at the Saskatoon Transit"? sounds awkward
  15.   Done In the sentence "The Highway 5 - Highway 35 junction features historical plaque which commemorates the Touchwood Hills Hudson Bay Company fur trade post established in 1879." add "a" between features and historical
  16.   Done Fix spelling of "Hw 755"
  17. What kind of museums are in Sturgis and Preeceville?
  18.   Done "is hosted at Verigin" sounds awkward, Try rephrasing
  19. In first sentence of Geophysical features section, add comma after "Saskatchewan"
  20.   Done Make sure to use present tense when describing the current aspects of the route, do not use "travel will be through"
  21. Clarify what an ecoregion is, possibly by adding a wikilink
  22.   Done "re-opened" should not be hyphenated
  23. In second paragraph of Geophysical features section, what are Watson and Wadena?
  24.   Done Hyphenate "three lake"
  25. Replace opening brace with parentheses
  26.   Done In Highway economy section, replace "agricultural" with "agriculture"
  27.   Done In first sentence of second paragraph of Highway configuration section, add comma after "Kamsack"
  28.   Done In next paragraoh, "directions" should be singular
  29.   Done In Upgrades section, remove comma after 2008
  30.   Done Can you make the second paragraph of the Upgrades section more clear by rewording?
  31.   Done In first section of third paragraph of upgrades section, change "a" to "an"
  32.   Done Fix redlink to correspond to wikilink to Ministry of Highways and Infrastructure (Saskatchewan)
  33.   Done "re-surface" should not be hyphenated
  34. Combine a lot of the short paragraphs in the Travel route section
  35.   Done "Zig-zagging" sounds awkward; try using a different word
  36. Do you think you can make the sentences more varied in the Travel route section?
  37.   Done Add an intersections table to the article
  38. I would suggest making the format of the article in line with the standards at Wikipedia:WikiProject Canada Roads by moving some of the sections around

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 03:21, 6 February 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for taking time to review the article. I have adressed the basic ones first, and will return to the more in-depth ones tomorrow when it is earlier in the day. Kind Regards SriMesh | talk 05:18, 6 February 2009 (UTC)Reply