Talk:Sarazanmai/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Tintor2 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 22:38, 30 October 2019 (UTC)
Hello. I'll be looking over this review. I believe it can pass it but first, I'll see if there are some minor isses. Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 22:38, 30 October 2019 (UTC)
Some minor stuff that I briefly noted:
- The infobox is good but in order to be more descriptive how about mentioning the lead characters presented in the image?
- There are seven total characters in the poster (11 if you count the Kappa-form characters), which I worry would overcrowd the Infobox if mentioned.
- Per WP:Lead, the lead should be expanded to cover more areas of the article. The two sections lacking coverage in the lead are production and reception. Just provide a brief intro in regards to these section like "Director wanted" "Critics praised the series for...."
- Added.
- The Synopsis is easy to understand but I would suggest clarifying that Amakusa is a city like "the city of Amakusa"
- Added.
- By any chance did I miss to read the release of an original soundtrack? They might fit in the section when the music is mentioned.
- Added info on soundtrack and split the info into its own section.
- Some sections below the first manga are a bit small. You could combine them into a "related media" in order to make them larger.
- Added.
- This article might be highly useful to further explain the series' popularity as some writers said it was their favorite of Spring.
- Added.
- By any chance did the first DVDs appear in Oricon polls? They could improve more the reception section by adding more coverage.
- I wasn't able to find Oricon data for the series from any sources I would deem reliable.
These are all the minor issues I found. You did an amazing work. I'll gladly pass it once you ping me and comment about these point I mentioned. Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 23:52, 30 October 2019 (UTC)