Talk:Sammy Rogers/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• "were auditioning" → "was auditioning" (referring to the entire show; both uses) Done
• "through out" → "throughout" Done
• "the Sammy" → "Sammy" (person; both uses) Done
• Quotes in the lead need references per WP:QUOTE. Done
• Overall, every single quote in the article needs to have a reference recited per WP:QUOTE. Done
• "She was successful and was called back to screen test auditions alongside other cast members Lindsay was then contacted her via telephone to offer her the role" feels like a run-off sentence and "Lindsay was then contacted her via" sounds off. Done
• "she dealt with dealt with" → "she dealt with" Done
• "in hospital" → "in the hospital" Done
• Add a period after "Dr". Done
• "Valentines Day" → "Valentine's Day" Done
• "break-up" → "break up" Done
• "night club" → "nightclub" Done
• "the couples first major storyline" → "the couple's first major storyline" Done
• "when Owen awake" → "when Owen awakes" or "when Owen is awake" Done
• "wheel chair" → "wheelchair" Done
• In #Relationship with Owen Daniels, add commas after "He added", "In addition", and "absence". Done
• Add commas after "Following her return" and "Upon her return". Done
• "paired the together" doesn't sound right. Done
• Add a comma after "He added" in #Reception. Done
• Archive sources, especially from Newspapers.com since a change in the title can result in their links not working. Done

Thank you for the review. I will complete the remaining two points later today.Rain the 1 06:58, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

I have just finished archiving all sources via the wayback machine.Rain the 1 15:41, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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