Talk:Sally James (presenter)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:08, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

• Avoid starting every paragraph with "In [year]".

• Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• "she was the music editor, and was a member of" → "she was a member and music editor of"

• I've re-organised the lead slightly, to take the music editor role up into the first para. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• Dr No → Dr. No
• "Jo Mercer, woman" → "Jo Mercer, a woman"
• Remove the comma after "converted houses".
• Remove the comma after "in 1980".
• Remove the comma after "as children".

• Amended as per the five points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• With this example, improve the filmography tables.

• Make the tables sortable.
• Add "!scope=row" for every film/tv title.
• Sort each role by last name.
• Sort titles (The Wind Blew Her Away should sort as Wind Blew Her Away, The)
• Finally, center references.

• Done. (Hopefully.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

The scope rows need a bit of work. See Francesca Gonshaw#Credits as a good example. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Ah. Hopefully OK now, Some Dude From North Carolina. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:26, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• #Discography is largely unsourced.

• Removed unsourced entries. (After failing to find reliable sources.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• #Bibliography is kinda short so maybe merge it into #Career.

• Deleted section as book is already mentioned in the body of the article. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• Properly cite sources.

• Added some details, not sure whether more is required. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:11, 17 July 2021 (UTC)

• Many thanks for undertaking the review, Some Dude From North Carolina. Hopefully I've addressed everything above. Let me know about anything else that is needed. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)