Talk:Salem and Lowell Railroad/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Rlink2 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rlink2 (talk · contribs) 02:16, 25 March 2022 (UTC)Reply


This is a short (but beautiful) GA so my comments wont be as long as the others.

Use browser find and replace to figure out what i am talking about

The Boston and Maine Railroad took over the Boston and Lowell in 1887. I know what you are trying to say here but a reader might not. Maybe you could rephrase if possible (not required, but would be nice)

with the motive power changing to diesel locomotives. what does "motive power" mean?

  • You are right, silly me.

North Reading, remove the comma here maybe?

Sources look good. Archived one reference at Wayback (ghostarchive, which is the only other one that can do pdf, is down at this moment) Stable history, all that looks good.

Overall, very impressed as usual.

@Rlink2: Thank you! I've addressed all your comments, let me know what you think. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 13:32, 25 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
@Trainsandotherthings: Will pass Rlink2 (talk) 14:17, 25 March 2022 (UTC)Reply