Talk:Sale el Sol (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: EditorE (talk · contribs) 20:25, 1 February 2014 (UTC) Alright, lets get this son of a gun review going.

• In the genre infobox, i think there is susposed to be a citation for the song being alternative rock. Maybe list Latino pop as well?

I added the citation for alt rock. However, I don't think Latin pop should be listed as it is only an influence in the case of "Sale el Sol" --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 03:54, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

• There is way too much background info on Shakira's albums She Wolf and Sale el Sol, as well as her song "Waka Waka (This Time for Africa)". I get that background info is useful for telling events that led up to the topic, but since this is a song article, and it talks about the song itself, even one sentence on She Wolf and/or "Waka Waka" is completely unnecessary.

I have condensed it now --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 03:54, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

• A release history table would be nice.

Actually there isn't much of a release history for "Sale el Sol". It was just released to iTunes in various countries on the same date. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 03:54, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

More to come. 和DITOREtails 20:25, 1 February 2014 (UTC) This official Ukraine chart position should be added to the charts table. 和DITOREtails 23:28, 4 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for the position. It has been included now. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:40, 6 February 2014 (UTC)

Sorry for the wait.

• One more thing, I'd suggest doing some splitting on that REALLY TOO BIG paragraph on the music video. 和DITOREtails 15:28, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

I have split it up a bit. Is it looking fine now? --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:25, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

Pass. Good work! 和DITOREtails 17:30, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you so much! --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:33, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

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