Talk:Sahib Bibi Aur Ghulam/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:05, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "who also co-star" → "who also co-stars"
• "V. K. Murthy in Andheri and Dhakuria completed the principal photography" → "Principal photography took place in Andheri and Dhakuria with cinematographer V. K. Murthy" or "Principal photography took place in Andheri and Dhakuria with director of photography V. K. Murthy"
• "at the its factory" – reword
• "an trainee" → "a trainee"
• "he was surprise" → "he was surprised"
• "concentrated on the screenplay writing" → "concentrated on writing the screenplay"
• "he arrived for" → "he arrived"
• "had potential to boost her career" → "had the potential to boost her career"
• Add a comma after "Bibi for Kumari".
• "consectitive" → "consecutive"
• "with adding" → "by adding"
• Remove the comma after "a new climax".
• "by both" → "from both"
• "last major contribution for" → "last major contribution to"
• The non-free use rationales for every image look good.
• Checked most sources; everything is properly cited. Great work on this article!
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:32, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:54, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

Progress

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed