Talk:SMS Olga/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:57, 30 December 2017 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:57, 30 December 2017 (UTC)

• No DABs
• Images appropriately licensed.
• old corvette Augusta, Shouldn't there be a comma after corvette? And another after Barbados
  • No on the first, but yes on the second
• Can you identify the engine type better? She's late enough to have compound-expansion engines.
  • Good point
    • I added it to the infobox for you.
• Link South America, Samoa, Barbados, Trinidad and Tobago, Venezuela, Brazil, rammed, Spain, battery
  • I think the standard is not to link to articles about modern states. I also don't think linking to naval ram in this case is appropriate, since it would imply that the steamship had a ram. Did link South America and battery though.
    • Given the oft-mentioned geographic illiteracy of Americans, any such policy strikes me as wishful thinking.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:25, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
• Do you mean the Orinoco River?
  • Good catch
• London Paddington station and London Victoria station Awkward. Tell the reader that they were in London visiting.
  • Reworded
• the former aboard the ironclad Hansa and the former aboard Notus. There should be a latter in her somewhere.
  • Fixed
• Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:16, 30 December 2017 (UTC)