Talk:SMS Kaiserin Augusta/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:42, 7 November 2011 (UTC)

I'll get to this in the next couple of days.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:42, 7 November 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   This is awkward Basilio Augustín, to Hong Kong, where the ship notified Berlin of the defeat of the Spanish garrison. The ship left Filipino waters on 13 August and arrived two days later And wouldn't this be better phrased as "which began"? which was conducted beginning in 1903

   Should be fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 14:38, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   Need publisher state/countries for Oxford, Greenwich, and Annapolis.\

   Added. Parsecboy (talk) 14:38, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   Link Muntz metal; what's it used for? When was she laid down?

   Don't forget these.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:36, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

   Thanks for reminding me - and as for laid down, 1890 is the best I can get. Parsecboy (talk) 22:41, 13 November 2011 (UTC)

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Comment

Is the infobox supposed to have characteristics in ft converted to meters? If so why are the characteristics in the section General characteristics given in meters converted to ft? they also slightly differ.(86.87.73.104 (talk) 19:12, 14 November 2011 (UTC))