Talk:SMS Brandenburg/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:42, 6 April 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteriaReply

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    The lede reads a little oddly towards the end. She spent her career in the Navy, but served in a limited capacity during the war.
    I removed the odd bit about the Imperial German Navy, that was a relic from the pre-expansion version. Parsecboy (talk) 20:29, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
    B. MoS compliance:  
    Need article title and place of pub for Cassier's Magazine and the article title for the United Service.
    Fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 20:29, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    A little odd to read so much about the maneuvers, but what the heck.
    There's not much else to say about the ship other than what's already there, so I thought I'd include it. Parsecboy (talk) 20:29, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: