Talk:São Tomé and Príncipe at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:19, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 20:19, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

• Short, sweet, and not much to comment on...

• "São Tomé and Príncipe first competed at the Olympic Games at the" Two "at the"s in rapid succession.
• "The country participated on six" -> "The country participated in the Olympics on six"
• "São Tomé and Príncipe participated in the Rio Paralympic Games from 7 to 18 September 2016.[5]" This is kinda choppy to be here, basically it is the first sentence of the article again.
• Did they have a flagbearer for the closing ceremony?

Otherwise, looks good. Courcelles (talk) 20:29, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

• @Courcelles: I believe that is all of your points actioned except for whether the country had a flag bearer for the closing ceremony because I could not locate a reliable source to verify it. MWright96 (talk) 06:11, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

• Very well. Then, this passes. Courcelles (talk) 17:53, 16 April 2018 (UTC)