Talk:Russian cruiser Admiral Makarov/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 15:37, 2 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • One dab link. Please fix.
    • That's in the hat note; I'm not sure how to fix it since it covers ships and people both.
  • The infobox and the text indicate different speeds for the ship.
    • Clarified; I only use designed speed in infoboxes as trial speeds are rarely reached during active service.
  • "She was modified to lay mines shortly after the war began and laid mines herself and provided cover for other ships laying minefields." - redundant in that "mines" is used 3 times.
    • Split into two sentences.
  • "The following year, the ship was one of a group of cruisers that visited Brest, France, the Isle of Portland in Great Britain, and Stavanger, Norway." - elaborate the purpose of these visits.
    • Can't; my sources don't specify. But I suspect that it was the usual flag-showing.
  • Gardener and Gray reference is not used in the footnotes.
    • Cite added.
More small fixes. —Ed!(talk) 15:37, 2 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:03, 2 December 2011 (UTC)Reply