Talk:Ron "Bumblefoot" Thal/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Retrohead (talk · contribs) 21:00, 28 July 2015 (UTC)

General notes

• Avoid references in the lead because the intro should not contain exclusive information. Introduction cites are appropriate only if they support an information that some readers/editors dispute, or something that seems controversial.
• Do another read on the article for errors in the manual style of writing: albums should be italicized (check Alive! by Kiss) or linking key words when they are first mentioned in the body (Guns N' Roses in the Bumblefoot & Solo Career section). Avoid non-encyclopedic aberrations such as "1st, 2nd, &", etc.
• Check the source formatting: article titles should not be all in capital letters, names of websites/publishers should be wikilinked and written as their Wikipedia article.
• I see there are few Facebook and Twitter links used as references. Generally speaking, social media is not allowed in good article, usless a specification is provided (important information that isn't available elsewhere, for example).
• I see there hasn't been much work done here, so I'll be archiving the nomination shortly.--Retrohead (talk) 19:26, 4 August 2015 (UTC)