Talk:Rock Your Body/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 11JORN (talk · contribs) 23:29, 27 July 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• The song received generally positive reviews, with critics noting it as a stand-out track --> The song received generally positive reviews, with music critics noting it as a stand-out track

 Done

Writing and inspiration

• Link Justified

 Done

Compositon and reception

• Michael Jackson was already linked before. Unlink it

 Done

• The same for Off the Wall

 Done

• Unlink Justified

 Done

Chart performance

• ARIA certification is not supported by source

 Done

• It charted within the top twenty on the Belgian Singles Chart --> Specify which of them

 Done

Music video

• Unlink Vanessa Marquez

 Done

Live performances

• Much repetition of "Timberlake" which can be replaced by "he", "the singer", or "the artist"

 Done

Sources

• Sources such as MTV, NME, Billboard, etc should have brackets in their publisher

 Done for NME but not MTV as it isn't a written source, and the Billboard references are from templates.

I am referring to FN4, it is an url.

But seeing how the template refs aren't in brackets, wouldn't that just produce inconsistency.

• FN2 Link MTV News and Viacom

 Done

• FN11 Publisher is IPC Media or Time Inc? Only one should remain

 Done

• FN12 Unlink MTV News and Viacom

 Done

Status

On hold.

Thanks for reviewing, I think the issues have been addressed. Et3rnal 19:39, 31 July 2013 (UTC)

Passed, contratulations! And sorry for the delay. Jorn ^talk 13:31, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

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