Talk:Robert W. Hayler/Archive 1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Dieter.Meinertzhagen in topic The grammar and syntax are awful
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Commons files used on this page or its Wikidata item have been nominated for deletion
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The grammar and syntax are awful
This reads like a straight lift from Navy reports. Missing prepositions, adjectives and adverbs. Needs considerable cleaning up.Grendel532 (talk) 04:12, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
- I have tried to address these justified concerns.
- Dieter.Meinertzhagen (talk) 17:45, 1 February 2022 (UTC)