Talk:Robert J. Henle/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:30, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

• " reduced the budget deficit by increasing enrollment,[18] which increased dramatically in the early 1970s." - Any way that having forms of increase twice in the same sentence?
  • Removed the redundancy. Ergo Sum 05:14, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
• Lead implies that the whole series of books was widely used, but the body suggests that only one book in specific was.
  • Clarified. Ergo Sum 05:13, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

That's about it, I think for GA. Good work. Hog Farm _Talk 02:40, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Thank you, Hog Farm. Ergo Sum 05:15, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

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