Talk:Rez (video game)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Indrian (talk · contribs) 19:57, 11 September 2020 (UTC)

This has been sitting way to long for a game of such pedigree. Time to fix that. Indrian (talk) 19:57, 11 September 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• "Production began in 1999 after the team" - What team? The team is never defined. - Perhaps just say after Mizuguchi or after United Game Artists?
  • Used the latter.
• "the developers included veterans of Panzer Dragoon creators Team Andromeda." - Is this really important enough for the lead? To me, it breaks the flow of the paragraph by being a bit of a non sequitur.
  • Removed. It was a hangover from the original lead.

Production

• "which was based in Shibuya and described as the perfect place to find visual inspiration for their games." Was UGA itself the best place to find inspiration, or the Shibuya area they were located in? I suspect you mean the latter, but right now it reads as the former.
  • I've just cut that bit. Again, a bit of a hangover.

Game Design

• "Mizuguchi particularly wanted to create a non-violent shooter appealing to many people." - This sentence is out of place here, as it does not connect thematically with the previous sentence. I think it might make a better first sentence for this paragraph actually.
  • Done, with suitable edits to maintain flow.

Those are some really minor points. Other than that, the article looks great. I will go ahead and palce this nomination  On hold, but I suspect I will be promoting quite soon. Indrian (talk) 20:23, 11 September 2020 (UTC)

@Indrian: All addressed. --ProtoDrake (talk) 20:53, 11 September 2020 (UTC)

Looks great. Time to promote! Indrian (talk) 22:19, 11 September 2020 (UTC)