Talk:Return to the Nightosphere and Daddy's Little Monster/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 06:17, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

• There's a circular link to Return to the Nightosphere in the plot summary for "Daddy's Little Monster".
• "this was completely discard": discarded, you mean?
• Italicize The Mary Sue (online news publication).

's it. Nice work, as always. On hold for 14 days. 23W 07:54, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

How's it look now? :)--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:20, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

I meant that The Mary Sue needed to be italicized in the body, but I went ahead and did it. Everything else looks good. 23W 19:26, 31 January 2015 (UTC)