Talk:Raising the Flag on the Three-Country Cairn/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (Highest is 4.8%) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

Background

• They attached a small and modest flag of Finland What does modest mean here? Unless the design was especially simple, or else Finland has special ceremonial flags (Such as golden frills on some US ceremonial flags), I suggest you remove modest.

Flag-raising

• a "Wer da?!" yell surprised the Finnish soldiers. suggest a should of "Wer da?!" surprised the Finnish soldiers.
• @Manelolo: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:06, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
  • @Iazyges: Thanks! Amended per your suggestions. Manelolo (talk) 15:31, 9 March 2018 (UTC)