Talk:Rainham, London/GA3

GA review

The article is well written and will pass once the following have been fixed:

• Please provide a Fair Use Rationale for the Rainham Casino image.  Done Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
• The every paragraph in the History section needs at least one citation.
• There is an overuse of wikilinking throughout the article. Links to common words like food, pebbles, glass, schoolchildren etc. should be removed.
• Can anymore be added to the history section on the 17th to 19th centuries?

All sources of history information have been exhausted, unfortunately. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

• The years in the History section should either all be linked or all be unlinked.  Done Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
• It should be made clearer what product is made by Tilda Rice (I assume it's rice).  Done Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
• Lists are discouraged in town articles. The list of schools should be made into prose, with maybe a brief description of each of the secondary schools.
• The phrase "dumping ground" should be replaced by something more encyclopedic

Any suggestions? Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

• The Commerce section could be renamed Economy, and could incorporate the Future section.

I’m not sure about this; the information in the future section is not really relevant to Rainham’s economy. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

• Are there any sports teams, museums, landmarks, etc. which could make up a Culture section?

Unfortunately there aren’t really any sports teams, and the closest thing to a museum is Rainham Library. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

Let me know once these have been fixed or if you disagree with any. The article's GA review will be placed on hold for a maximum of seven days. Thanks. Epbr123 10:34, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

Just the citations, lists and overlinking to sort out. Epbr123 13:26, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

I have to fail the article. The seven days have now passed and not all the problems have been fixed. Epbr123 19:00, 4 June 2007 (UTC)