Talk:Pyjama shark/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Xtzou in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 19:19, 19 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

  • "The pyjama shark is the larger and thicker-bodied member of the genus, growing to 1.1 m (3.6 ft) long and 7.9 kg (17 lb) or more in weight." This sentence confuses me, as what is it larger and thicker-bodied than?
  • Changed to "...thicker-bodied of the two Poroderma species"
  • Done.
  • Too bad, no picture.

Xtzou (Talk) 20:43, 19 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 23:29, 19 May 2010 (UTC)Reply
Everything looks good, though I am not a specialist in the field. I do understand and enjoy most of the article. Xtzou (Talk) 14:01, 20 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:   Clearly written and concise
    B. MoS compliance:   Complies with basic MoS
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:   Reliable sources
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:   Well referenced
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:   Sets the context
    B. Focused:   Remains focused on the topic
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: Pass!  

Congratulations! Xtzou (Talk) 14:01, 20 May 2010 (UTC)Reply