Talk:Protostrator/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cplakidas in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:29, 14 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:29, 14 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

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MOS:CIRCA, please – Finnusertop (talkcontribs) 18:48, 14 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

  • it having a prominent role in imperial ceremonies, and served as a springboard for several capable individuals, like Manuel the Armenian or the future emperors Michael II and Basil I the Macedonian. This is almost identical to the sentence in the main body. Reword this and generalize it to avoid duplication.
  • Image properly licensed.
  • typos career underLeo VI the Wise, Grandson of the Caaesar and in Thessalonica. after his death
  • Since the list isn't sortable, remove all the redundant links to the various emperors, etc.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:29, 16 January 2017 (UTC)Reply
Hi Sturmvogel 66! Outstanding issues fixed. Cheers, Constantine 09:53, 17 January 2017 (UTC)Reply