Talk:Peyk-i Şevket-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:07, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:07, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK.
• Image appropriately licensed.
• Standardize on ftin conversions from meters, please.
  • I think the only one of these I saw was the draft figure in the box, which is now fixed.
    • I actually meant for you to add them for all of the conversions, but I went ahead and added them myself.
• as a torpedo cruiser by the Ottoman Navy,[1] was also sometimes referred to as Missing conjunction, I think.
  • Good catch.
• The ships were powered by a pair of vertical triple-expansion engines each driving a screw propeller. The ships' four Awkward, howzabout "their" for the beginning of the second sentence?
  • Works for me.
• Watch your rounding; 450mm isn't 18 inches.
  • These dang conversion templates...
• Link to definition of caliber.
  • It's already there.
    • Ooops, indeed it was!
• Title case for Erickson, please.
  • Fixed.
• 500th GA review! You should feel honored ;-) Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:19, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
  • I certainly do! I've got to catch up - only done 94... Parsecboy (talk) 12:53, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
    • You're practically a FNG! (swaggers into the saloon and puts a foot on the bar rail while ordering a double shot of sarsaparilla) (I wonder what it tastes like? Don't think I've ever actually had any.)--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:38, 24 February 2015 (UTC)