Talk:Pero Qué Necesidad/GA2

GA Review

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Nominator: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 17:48, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:07, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Of course we've been in reviews together for the past so you know what to expect; this one should be done quickly! --K. Peake 08:07, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Change Soundabout Studio to Soundabout per Template:Infobox song
• The translation title can be written out in the body, rather than invoking the ref in the lead
• "Its production was handled by" → "The song was produced by" and also add written by Juan Gabriel since the lead is short enough that you could do with this inclusion
• "The song is a" → "It is a" to sound less repetitive
• "It was released" → "The song was released"
• "with critics listing" → "with a few critics listing"
• The term "several" being used is redundant
• Add a comma before whose in the last sentence

Background and composition

• Add the release year of "Heal the World" on the audio sample
• "a hiatus following legal disputes" → "a hiatus after legal disputes"
• "The dispute involved Gabriel" → "The dispute involved Juan Gabriel" to be consistent
• "but would not be released" → "but it would not be released"
• "and Gabriel renewed his" → "and Juan Gabriel renewed his"
• "both the name of the album" → "both the album's title of" removing the brackets since they would not be needed in this case
• "in which lyrics describes" → "in which the lyrics describe"
• "He re-recorded the track" → "Juan Gabriel re-recorded the track"

Promotion and reception

• Per the Los Angeles Times ref currently used in the lead, add a second sentence with the translated title and mention the Spanish radio from that ref
• "brotherhood". It features children" → "brotherhood", featuring children" to improve the flow
• "Ramiro Burr wrote for the" → "Ramiro Burr, writing for the"
• "compared it to ABBA" → "compared the song to ABBA"
• "despite its "serious theme", he found it" → "despite the "serious theme", he found the song"
• "Classic Rock reviewer ranked it" → "a Classic Rock reviewer ranked the song" and the source shows number seven for me, not number three
• "Gabriel earned the" → "Juan Gabriel earned the"
• "Commercially, it topped" → "Commercially, the track topped"

Charts

• Why is this table not present when the song did reach charts?

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks fab at 21.3%!!!
• Cite Classic Rock as magazine instead on ref 2
• Wikilink La Tercera on ref 7
• Wikilink Austin American-Statesman on ref 8
• El Diario NY → El Diario New York and pipe to El Diario La Prensa on ref 9
• Remove AllMusic from the title of ref 11
• Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 12
• Pipe Proceso to Proceso (magazine) on ref 16
• For ref 21 and the prose, be consistent with either Singersroom or SingersRoom
• Cite Univision as publisher instead on ref 22, removing Univision Communications altogether
• Wikilink Prometheus Global Media on ref 23
• Wikilink La Prensa de San Antonio on ref 27

Final thoughts and verdict

•  On hold until everything is covered; this article passes a lot of the criterion but some changes are needed to get it over the line! --K. Peake 08:48, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake Thanks as always for the reviews! I addressed everything mentioned, but I wasn't sure what you meant with the LA Times article for the translation so I did the best as I understood. Erick (talk) 23:50, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

  @Erick Thank you, however "compared it to ABBA" needs to use the song instead and wikilink La Tercera on ref 7; the translation source is exactly to my liking fab job! --K. Peake 09:12, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake  Done Erick (talk) 15:39, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass now, thanks for the quick fixes here! --K. Peake 17:26, 3 June 2024 (UTC)