Talk:Pennsylvania Route 737/GA2

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Admrboltz in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    You use the abbreviation Route 737 in the 2nd paragraph of the lead but do not define it.

"In Eagle Point, the road gets slightly developed, and after the highway intersects with Sweet Corn Drive, Route 737 leaves the community and begins its way to the northwest." the end seems ackward, can you rephrase it?

"Route 737 heads to the northwest, intersecting with Long Dam Road, which parallels through another set of deep forests. At a curve to the north, the highway intersects with Kutz Mill Road, the highway heads through a close area of fields and forests." rephrase.

"In Krumsville, the highway becomes more developed, passing local commercial businesses." did it go to school, earn more money? What do you mean more developed?

"There it interchanges with Interstate 78 and U.S. Route 22 at Interchange 40." rephrase please.

"After the interchange, the highway heads northward into the rural regions of Krumsville, intersecting with the former alignment of U.S. 22." cite former allignment.

  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    I'm not going to get into the map issue that the last GAN touched on, but I dont know how well this would hold up past GA on just the Yahoo Map...
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    The map could use a key, esp if this were to go to ACR or FAC.
    I don't plan on going any further.Mitch32(Want help? See here!) 15:16, 9 August 2009 (UTC)Reply
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    On hold awaiting revisions --Admrboltz (talk) 03:55, 9 August 2009 (UTC)Reply
Done.Mitch32(Want help? See here!) 15:16, 9 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

Passing --Admrboltz (talk) 15:25, 9 August 2009 (UTC)Reply