Talk:Pennsylvania Route 463/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Pzoxicuvybtnrm in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: --PCB 04:54, 10 February 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- The lead could be expanded a little.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- It's not problem, but the pictures are strikingly similar. :)
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- I will put the article on hold for a couple of prose fixes.
- Pass/Fail:
Lead:
- It needs to be expanded a little more on the Route description.
- "It runs through suburban areas..." Rather vague.
Route description:
- Your descriptions of land uses are a little vague. (Residences, Businesses, Commercial, Farms...)
- "...wooded areas of homes." Wood homes? People living in trees?
- What more business? How can a route pass through business?
- How can something cross a proposed parkway?
- "The road intersects Keith Valley Road and passes between Samuel Carpenter Park and homes to the northeast and business parks to the southwest." A little rambling here.
- I see a repeating pattern that should be changed. "...passes BLAH road, with BLAH to the DIRECTION and BLAH to the OTHERDIRECTION." Perhaps you could adjust some of these sentences. To tell you the truth, all these terrain descriptions are a little boring.
History:
- Perhaps reword some of the sentences that say "IN/BY YEAR, BLAH happened."
- Too many abbreviations! All this rerouting thing is a little confusing. Adding more normal language words would help. There are too many numbers and abbreviations.
Major intersections: